Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Breaking Thorugh 1st Writing

The book Breaking Through is very intresting, a little sad at times but it has its ups...but anyways this book is about a faimly of imagrants who came to united states to start out fresh. After staying 10 years at the united states, the boarder patrol finds them and sends them back to Mexico. The dad and the 3 youngest kids are Legal so then the rest of the faimly get permission to go back,but they dont have enough money so the two oldest Roberto and Panchito had to go back and make money. Panchito and Roberto have to live by themslef not for long but just till they get enough money, they both are a little sad but they get through it. While Robert and Panchito work they still had to attend school. They decied to go to a vest dance. This will be the first time they attended a dance and they both didn't know how to dance. Robert and Panchito just stood around and observed their surroundings. After a couple of times attending the vest dance, they both gain courage to ask girls to dance with them. Panchito ask a girl from his class to dance and their are good freinds. After the Accident at her house, she stops talking to Panchito but he has no idea why. In April, Roberto and Panchito family finally comes back, and they are so Excited to see each other. They talked until all of the family members caught up from lost time. The next morning, Panchito and his papa start working at the fields and papa took Panchito and gave him the opprtunity to care for 3 acres of starwberries. They both took care of the field for a while until all of a sudden the fields become Brown and just died. This was the time when their Papa became upset and mean along with not communicating to anyone in the family.

Panchito finally passes the 8th Grade and before Panchito left his Dad gave him a medal but his Dad did not attend his son graduation. Panchito sees his brother Roberto in the audience during his graduation ceremony. Roberto was the only one who was able to make it for Panchito's graduation. Panchito still imagined and pictured his parents watching him even though they both were absent, on his special day.

1 comment:

Jonah said...

what up bro i love your blog man its so awesome man you have to show me how to put a picture!!!